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Finally made it 
The Mary-Sue-Viona, just like the good old days 
I added some quote in this strip so it could raise the dramatic more, like how Mary Sue works ahihi~
SO~! I won't talk anymore nonsense time for the story of little girl strong will Viona Phuturo~ (yes it's Phuturo, not Futuro like today ahi)
I called this Fullmetal Alchemist - The Time Traveler
Viona and her friend, Phoenix (which was my classmate's OC), is highschool students, they're 13 back then, but one day when they were watching TV, a mysterious force dragged them back to the past (pic 1), Viona was dragged to Resembool, and Phoenix was dragged to Central. Viona met Pinako Rockbell, she thought her was Ed at first sight because she looks to alike him = v =, but after some explaination and the return of Ed to fix his automail, problem solved (wow so convenient...).
Viona worried sick for Phoenix, but then she got a phone call from Central, it's Phoenix, she knew Viona was near Ed so she used the military phone to call (wow Phoenix how the hell did you get in the office to call without being caught and how the hell could you know Pinako's phone number....?). Then, Viona just keep asking Ed to bring her alone when he come back to Central City, she used bad attitude on him like it's his fault she got drag away and he has to take the responsible (pic 2)... There Ed go, annoyed as hell but still accepted becausemotherfuckerwhoknowwhatwillthiskiddoifhedontbringhertocentral.
Then, when Ed, Al and Viona arrived to Central, Viona reunioned with Phoenix, Phoenix was staying with Riza, and in a magical way Phoenix was hired into the Military office and working there (yep, a 13 years old girl work in the military AND there's nothing owrong with that). Through weeks of keep finding and finding way to get back, they finally found the solution, but it has to goes the same way with alchemy, so yeah, like any fuckingmainstreamFMAmarysue Viona asked for help from Ed, asked him to teach her Alchemy (pic 3).
Yes, ofcourse our god Edward Elric sama would help her becauseshesamarysueandwhenshewantshegets, she's a good learner, she learned everything in just 2 month and became so good, even better than Ed because she found out a new circle of transmutation, but she hasn't tried them yet. The Homunculus knew about her, and Father wanted her (marysue aura, make up~~~~). Father sent Gluttony to kidnap her, she and Gluttony got a fight (pic 4), she wounded so bad but keep fighting (wow Viona where on earth did you learn to fight so pro....), then finally, she got her chance to use the secret Transmutation Circle she created, Hurricane Transmute~~~ She was so suceeded, she beated up Gluttony, and came home without any help becauseshessohardcore.
After a year here now she and Phoenix finally can go home because her new Transmutation Circle - Time Transmute, has done, but there's one small problem, they need to fly to get through the Big Door while they're in a progress of transmutation. She asked Roy Mustang to find her a person who could transform her in to Dove Chimera, with wings~~~ But the operation didn't suceed and she only had one wing like a freak... But our Viona never give up~ She went to Rush Valley withoutanyfuckingcuriouswhyshegotawing and asked the greatest automail engineer to make her an automail wing (oh I forgot to mention, she's now a Time Alchemist, surprisedddd~~~~, that why she has so much money for this). Yes ofcourse the engineer could make them (with belive~~~), now she got one true and one automail wing, so cool omg~~ She tried to bond them together with her nerve and it's hurt alots, she even bleeded, but she didn't stop because she wanted to go ome so badly she just gotta do that (pic 5)
And then for the ending, she and Phoenix can go home now after all those things, before they go, Ed just hold Viona back and confessed to her, because he found out Viona is the type of girl he was looking for or something, but Viona was so good, so goddess, she told Ed to go back with Winry because she and Ed can't stay with eachother anymore Ed shouldn't love her he would broken heart when she's gone, Ed hugged her for the last time, so lovely dovey and dramatic uhu (pic 6)
And so the story end with Viona-the-unbreakable-hardcoreness-angel and Phoenix-the-mother-fucking-sidekick went back to time, to their home city, fixed things and live happily ever after (with some dramatic because Viona missed Ed uhuh)
Wew guys, belive it or not but this is the true story of Viona back then =]], basically me and my friend used our mascot to create them and bring them into the fandom just for fun but it's a real deal with me... I don't know what was I thinking back then ahaha....
But anyway, let's this also be an example for newbie of you're going to create FMA OC, I know everyone make their mistakes in the first place, but don't be so far like me eheheheh~~
Will be part 2 if I dare....
Fullmetal Alchemist (c) Hiromu Arakawa
Viona (c) Me
DO NOT USE WITHOUT PERMISSION
The Mary-Sue-Viona, just like the good old days I added some quote in this strip so it could raise the dramatic more, like how Mary Sue works ahihi~
SO~! I won't talk anymore nonsense time for the story of little girl strong will Viona Phuturo~ (yes it's Phuturo, not Futuro like today ahi)
I called this Fullmetal Alchemist - The Time Traveler
Viona and her friend, Phoenix (which was my classmate's OC), is highschool students, they're 13 back then, but one day when they were watching TV, a mysterious force dragged them back to the past (pic 1), Viona was dragged to Resembool, and Phoenix was dragged to Central. Viona met Pinako Rockbell, she thought her was Ed at first sight because she looks to alike him = v =, but after some explaination and the return of Ed to fix his automail, problem solved (wow so convenient...).
Viona worried sick for Phoenix, but then she got a phone call from Central, it's Phoenix, she knew Viona was near Ed so she used the military phone to call (wow Phoenix how the hell did you get in the office to call without being caught and how the hell could you know Pinako's phone number....?). Then, Viona just keep asking Ed to bring her alone when he come back to Central City, she used bad attitude on him like it's his fault she got drag away and he has to take the responsible (pic 2)... There Ed go, annoyed as hell but still accepted becausemotherfuckerwhoknowwhatwillthiskiddoifhedontbringhertocentral.
Then, when Ed, Al and Viona arrived to Central, Viona reunioned with Phoenix, Phoenix was staying with Riza, and in a magical way Phoenix was hired into the Military office and working there (yep, a 13 years old girl work in the military AND there's nothing owrong with that). Through weeks of keep finding and finding way to get back, they finally found the solution, but it has to goes the same way with alchemy, so yeah, like any fuckingmainstreamFMAmarysue Viona asked for help from Ed, asked him to teach her Alchemy (pic 3).
Yes, ofcourse our god Edward Elric sama would help her becauseshesamarysueandwhenshewantshegets, she's a good learner, she learned everything in just 2 month and became so good, even better than Ed because she found out a new circle of transmutation, but she hasn't tried them yet. The Homunculus knew about her, and Father wanted her (marysue aura, make up~~~~). Father sent Gluttony to kidnap her, she and Gluttony got a fight (pic 4), she wounded so bad but keep fighting (wow Viona where on earth did you learn to fight so pro....), then finally, she got her chance to use the secret Transmutation Circle she created, Hurricane Transmute~~~ She was so suceeded, she beated up Gluttony, and came home without any help becauseshessohardcore.
After a year here now she and Phoenix finally can go home because her new Transmutation Circle - Time Transmute, has done, but there's one small problem, they need to fly to get through the Big Door while they're in a progress of transmutation. She asked Roy Mustang to find her a person who could transform her in to Dove Chimera, with wings~~~ But the operation didn't suceed and she only had one wing like a freak... But our Viona never give up~ She went to Rush Valley withoutanyfuckingcuriouswhyshegotawing and asked the greatest automail engineer to make her an automail wing (oh I forgot to mention, she's now a Time Alchemist, surprisedddd~~~~, that why she has so much money for this). Yes ofcourse the engineer could make them (with belive~~~), now she got one true and one automail wing, so cool omg~~ She tried to bond them together with her nerve and it's hurt alots, she even bleeded, but she didn't stop because she wanted to go ome so badly she just gotta do that (pic 5)
And then for the ending, she and Phoenix can go home now after all those things, before they go, Ed just hold Viona back and confessed to her, because he found out Viona is the type of girl he was looking for or something, but Viona was so good, so goddess, she told Ed to go back with Winry because she and Ed can't stay with eachother anymore Ed shouldn't love her he would broken heart when she's gone, Ed hugged her for the last time, so lovely dovey and dramatic uhu (pic 6)
And so the story end with Viona-the-unbreakable-hardcoreness-angel and Phoenix-the-mother-fucking-sidekick went back to time, to their home city, fixed things and live happily ever after (with some dramatic because Viona missed Ed uhuh)
Wew guys, belive it or not but this is the true story of Viona back then =]], basically me and my friend used our mascot to create them and bring them into the fandom just for fun but it's a real deal with me... I don't know what was I thinking back then ahaha....
But anyway, let's this also be an example for newbie of you're going to create FMA OC, I know everyone make their mistakes in the first place, but don't be so far like me eheheheh~~
Will be part 2 if I dare....
Fullmetal Alchemist (c) Hiromu Arakawa
Viona (c) Me
DO NOT USE WITHOUT PERMISSION
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What a beautiful story! xD And it's amazing to see just how much progress is made in a character after working on them for so many years, especially when recalled in such a capturing way!~ 